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2021.09.25 20:55 DEADLYVISION30 Review my writing

Hey guys hope you are doing well I know all of you are very busy but I request for 5 minutes of your time if you can read what I wrote and point out my mistakes for me I am a newbie and I am entering this industry as I learn and test it would be appreciated I want to earn but I am currently practicing so any criticism would be appreciated
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2021.09.25 20:55 Smirkhuman Takumi Nakazawa

this rankdown fucking sucks
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2021.09.25 20:55 Physical-Charity-326 I think my sister is going to put herself in danger

I'm not going to say which parent or any sort of locations so I can keep this anonymous. I need advice on what to do.
My sister and I (twins) both just turned 18 not too long ago. My sister joined this online community when she was 16 years old. She had always been a little reserved on what she was doing in the community. I had some worries at first but didn't pay too much attention to it.
A bit after she turned 17, my parent looked through her phone and found out she had been sexting and talking to another person in the community. This person is in his mid to late 30s, lives in a state about 18 hours away, and has 3 children according to my sister. She also made it very clear to the man that she just turned 17 and was still in high school.
She said after she was punished, she stopped talking to him for a bit. Just a few months ago right before we turned 18, she told me she got back into contact with the man. She told me from the get-go that she was working on a relationship with him. She begged me not to tell the parent, and I (being the gullible person I am) told her I wouldn't tell the parent.
Now in present day, (still 18, graduated high school, working full time and going to college part time) I am planning on moving into my own apartment. My sister is also working full time and asked if her and I could get an apartment together so we could split the bills and have our own place. I told her "why not?" And agreed. We were looking at places and the topic of my boyfriend came up and him moving in. She asked if I wanted him to move in and I told her no, I don't want to live with him until after marriage. She then brought up the man she has been talking to and said that they are trying to plan out a time to meet up. She said they want to live together for a week or so and see how they do together.
I was in absolute shock, I couldn't think of anything to say to her so I told her she needed to be careful. I quickly excused myself and left to think. The other day I tried going to her and telling her that (coming from a good place) that this isnt safe and in all honesty is kinda creepy. I might have been a bit mean here, but I told her that I didn't want to live in a house with a man in his mid 30s that I don't know, that it was weird and scary and shouldn't be happening. I would understand if he was like 4 years older than her, but hes not. He's 12+ years older.
She wouldn't hear me out for anything I had to say. I don't know what to say or do at this point. Shes my twin sister and I don't want anything to happen to her that could have been prevented. What do I do?
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2021.09.25 20:55 KMDK2 Given that there are many civilizations in the MCU that are waaaay more technologically advanced than humans, shouldn't there have been aliens that have already discovered time travel and done the time heist within that 5 year period?

It was a mass genocide. I'm sure every race of intelligent aliens scrambling to find a solution would have thought of that and had the means to do it as well.
Plus Thanos was able to mass-produce those Pym Particles in such a short time too
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2021.09.25 20:55 lotsabird He ended it after 7 years, a month before we were supposed to get married. Came back for a week and broke up with me again.

Cw: self-harm, Sucde
I’m struggling a lot. My mental health has plummeted and I’ve been going to group therapy 3 times a week the past month. I’ve had a lot of loss in my life; both my mother (5 years ago) and 5 year old sister passed (15 years ago). Was in the hospital after an attempt of taking my life; have been struggling with self harm. Just started a new medication yesterday to help me through the pain, but here’s the long story short.
Earlier this year I told him I wanted to change my name— not change it completely, just add on to it when we get married. My first name would become part of my middle name. He was very supportive of this.
His family wasn’t. I told his brother over a holiday along with the fact I was exploring my gender identity but that was still up in the air (genderfluid; sometimes I just feel in-between woman and nonbinary, but I still am figuring that out.) Ex knew about all of this. His brother took it into his own hands and told his parents; somehow the story got warped around and they made accusations and had questions about things that were not true at all. It became a whole family ordeal, and his brother did not apologize or communicate with me at all for telling them something that sensitive. Ex also talked to them on the phone a lot; did not communicate at all about hour long conversations. It lead to a lot of fighting and tears and me struggling to convey that I was uncomfortable with his family, and that I didn’t know if I wanted to even see his brother at the wedding. This all happened 2 months before it was scheduled.
Eventually one fight became the last straw and he moved out to live with his parents. There have been buckets of tears, begging him to stay, constant texting and no contact. 2 weeks after he finally talked to me, we met and wanted to work through it. Things were amazing, a whole week we had made the promise to communicate and work through it all. He expressed confidence we’d come back stronger than ever.
Then it turned on its head. He cut my off out of the blue this past Sunday. Told me it was mostly family stuff, and subtly indicated they may have given him an ultimatum of some kind. Mutual friends have also expressed he suggested the same, that someone was pulling the strings and he was acting like a martyr to “protect me.” He blocked my number and I have no means of getting a hold of him.
We own a house together and bills are coming in for October. I won’t be able to pay for all of them myself and the mortgage. I have support systems that are willing to help some, but I’m not sure what will happen in the future. I am not employed; I am reaching out Monday to a place to help find something.
I don’t know what a future looks like without him. Im broken. It hurts. Im trying so hard to find a reason to live but it’s painful.
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2021.09.25 20:55 mahcoll How did Stephen King come up with the idea to write Pet Sematary?

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2021.09.25 20:55 Key-Garden6968 Lily’s in the later seasons

So I know this is talked about a lot but I would like to hear some more about it. Why do you like/dislike Lily in the later season?
Personally I don’t find her character to be annoying but it’s her monotone voice. She never seems enthusiastic or interested in whatever the family is talking about. Another thing I noticed specifically in season 10 a lot of her scenes she is always snapping at people or fighting with her friends. I get they might’ve been trying to make her an angry teen or whatever but It made it hard to watch her scenes.
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2021.09.25 20:55 Snoo-56500 TRASH OR PASS

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2021.09.25 20:55 nathanielbartholem Waveform compared with Poynting performance for an external mimo antenna?

Waveform compared with Poynting performance for an external mimo antenna? I see lots of people using the Waveform antenna.
Reading the specifications, doesn't the Poynting do better, especially for the 5g bands that t-mobile uses -- and have higher gain?

Poynting details

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2021.09.25 20:55 nesujii is my new labret crooked or just swollen? i know its hard to line up with the medusa but >:(((

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2021.09.25 20:55 weeksch2 Honest question, what's the proper term for a group of Subarus? Gaggle? Vape? A Vape of Subarus?

Honest question, what's the proper term for a group of Subarus? Gaggle? Vape? A Vape of Subarus? submitted by weeksch2 to subaru [link] [comments]

2021.09.25 20:55 vigor_ninja Would you rather have 100 acres of land with no house on it, or a nice home on 1 acre of land, why or why not?

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2021.09.25 20:55 yodableu Identify these cars in this old photograph

I'm trying to date a photograph and the best shot I have is by identifying the cars. I know nothing about vintage cars so I'm turning to your expertise!
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2021.09.25 20:55 Corgi02 What’s this thing that came with my guitar? I’m assuming it’s for a strap but idk

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2021.09.25 20:55 arduouspaths these 5.10s at the New sure are stout!

these 5.10s at the New sure are stout! submitted by arduouspaths to ClimbingPorn [link] [comments]

2021.09.25 20:55 Lissyy0217 Danube

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2021.09.25 20:55 Opal_Snow Order is Locked

Hello, I pledged back in March or April of this year and the Backerkit website says my order is locked and has been since May 1st. Does anyone know how I can get my product key or do I have to wait until the game is released?
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2021.09.25 20:55 63oscar Now what do I do with it? Aside from hold.

Now what do I do with it? Aside from hold. submitted by 63oscar to RyoshisVision [link] [comments]

2021.09.25 20:55 Wx_Watching FR8

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2021.09.25 20:55 thesamgreen I’d say my new bow is accurate. First robin hood.

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2021.09.25 20:55 Grand-sea-emperor Humans have the highest body count in war

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2021.09.25 20:55 Pupbilly What a cutie!!

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2021.09.25 20:55 _Unpopular_Person_ Nothing like a good hiding spot. This guy will protect me, right?

Nothing like a good hiding spot. This guy will protect me, right? submitted by _Unpopular_Person_ to CallOfDutyMobile [link] [comments]

2021.09.25 20:55 Frostyo4 [US-WA] [H] Hati-S Ace Wireless, Steelseries Prime Black Ice [W] Paypal

Hati-S Ace Wireless - $135 shipped OBO
Newest version, transparent blue. First owner, used for a couple hours. No QC issues, apart from the cheap on/off switch G-Wolves decided to use. Comes with tiger ice installed plus extra sets of tiger ice and stock hati glides.
Prime Black Ice - $75 shipped OBO
Bought it because it is the coolest looking mouse I've ever seen. Unused, sat on a shelf. Downsizing due to moving, so asking what I paid for it. Pretty sure it's out of stock everywhere.
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